This is a series of posts detailing old ideas for The Mannamong and explaining their changes or omission up to the final draft.
Something I find fascinating looking back on my old ideas is seeing which ideas ended up being scrapped. As I learned how to write better over the years, I became more insightful about which ideas need to be fleshed out, rewritten, or ignored for being inessential. Previously, I mentioned how Tontorus went through a complete rework on who he was and his origins. Kali hardly changed as a character, just fleshed out with defined traits as I wrote the plot. But one of her most significant changes was her family.
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