This is a series of posts detailing old ideas for The Mannamong and explaining their changes or omission up to the final draft.
In terms of who was the first character I created for The Mannamong, it’s either Kali and Tontorus, but I cannot remember. Either way, Tontorus would be the main focus of the titular species in question. Sometimes, he was written as the main protagonist in my early drafts. Overshadowing Kali in prominence due to the plot centering around him. It wasn’t until I started working on what would become the final version today, after graduating college, that I decided Kali would be the main lead. This was primarily due to the drastic change in Tonto’s characterization…
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